This is good, but...
I'll admit, I didn't really start looking at your art and animations, until I watched your "I Said NO" flash cartoon. You've improved but, I feel like Leem's hand is too small. The folds in the clothes are good, but the characters seem to flat to me(in my opinion, I could be wrong). Overall, you're a great anime artist, just try challenging yourself every now and then. ^_^
~Yun-chan