Yun-chan's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Love on the Beach]

What is this?

This was a random piece of ox turd. I didn't get the point of this flash. What were you trying to accomplish in this piece? Next time don't rush your next project. Think about your story plot, because plot is everything when it comes to animations, jokes, games, etc...I can understand if you worked hard on this, but I don't see it at all. I see a rushed flash animation, with bad voice acting, bad lines, and bad plot. Also, I highly recommend you put this under "M" for mature as there's plenty of panty shots, and the act suicide.

[CoolDr's Trad. Animation]

Nice presentation!

Glad to see more of your work! Your earlier projects are great, hey we all start somewhere and grow along the way! You definitely got better, and you're just going to continue to get better over time!

Keep up the great creations! :3

CoolDrMoney responds:

thnaks

[Stuck!]

Interesting, but seems to be lacking in areas.

I got the feel of Ren and Stimpy from watching this, and that's cool! Nice to see some old school stuff on NG every now and then. The audio was good, and the artwork was simple yet--different. Which is good, as I like seeing different art styles! :D

Now, I rate it 7 because I felt like it was lacking in some areas, as others have said in their reviews. Though, it was nice to watch something simple that I didn't have to think about what was going on. I liked the intro, as you timed it well that the viewer knew what to expect. The movements and sounds were great.

I understand how flash projects can be time consuming, and then school as well. Though, don't feel like you have to rush. I myself, have been working on one project for three months now, but I'm not rushing because I want to submit my best, not my half-assed pieces. Not saying it wasn't well done, it just could've been done a little better.

Hope my review helps, and I look forward to more of your creations! :D

CoolDrMoney responds:

Fair review. I feel like I can do much better than this too

[Solar City]

Good animation flow, though a lot to be desired..

You have an interesting idea going, but it felt like the whole animation was last minute. What you could have done was start on Miles finding the headphones and he has that transformation, and maybe even go to one scene where these mechanical robots are fighting some of these "creatures."

Or heres an even easier idea that could work, just use the music and have Miles test run the headphones.

Advice: Don't be afraid to make a storyline, a plot helps awesome characters develop and it helps the creator stay on course to what he/she wants to show to the audience.

Keep up the creativity, as you do have potential.

[Stamp on the Ground]

Awesome work!

I've probably watched all your flashes and this one is my favorite! I even downloaded the song it was so good! I love your art style, it's soo simple but great at the same time. I hope to see more of your creations in the future, because when I'm feeling down I watch yours. Keep up the great work!

[The Love I'm Searching 4]

Definitely different...

After watching a couple of your flashes, I enjoyed this one most of all! You definitely have talent, and can't wait to see what else you come up with!